Assignment 2
The picture
It was a day I will never forget. It started in the morning when I woke up and decided to go out with my friends. Before that I went to gym and there I tried to hang on a pull-up bar as long as I could. I tried many times to beat my own record but I couldn't and that's when one of my friends show up to the gym. She told me that I need to hurry up and come out. I was confused and I asked why I need to hurry but I got my answer when I got out with her from the gym.
I saw a few of my friends and they all had a shovel on their hands and one of them said -''Hurry up we are going to find a treasure from the woods''. When we got there we all started to dig the ground. I was still confused. I saw a map which someone has left on the ground and I went to take a look of it. Just when I got the map on my hands I heard my friend screaming. We all thought that he find a treasure but it find out that he was just hurt his fingers. Fortunately I had one plaster with me and I gave it to him.
When that situation was solved I took the map back to my hands. Treasure hideout was marked with red color and I noticed that we were at the wrong place and we had to find stairs to down. I told that to everyone else and we found those stairs and went down. There we started to dig again, hopefully at the right place. I heard a scream again. This time it really was something. We all went there and we saw that treasure except it was just an old chest.
We picked up the chest and decided to take it to my friends warehouse. When we got there I went to warehouses door and opened it and walked inside. The others just followed me and put the chest on old table which was in the middle of the warehouse. We examine the chest and we didn't find any key or a keyhole. Instead of that we found a button.
We were carefully and tried to think what could happen if we pressed the button. Maybe it will open of maybe it will explode... One of my friends decided to be the brave one to press that button and told all of us to step back if something happens. Then he pressed it on the most dramatic way. Then it was quiet for a moment and the chest opened.
This was a moment when every one were at the same time confused and disappointed. In the chest was just a picture of a child with a small dog. I took it on my hand and turned it around. There was someones address and we decided to take the picture to that address. On the way I noticed that I had left that picture at the warehouse and I went back to get it. It wasn't anymore on the chest and I started to think where I put it. Then I realized that I had put it on a fridge. I reached it from there and ran back to my friends.
Then we got to that address. We went to the door together and rang the doorbell. An old lady opened the door and we gave that picture for her. She was so happy and said thank you for us so many times. After that we left to play football and discussed about that we didn't ever get to know what was the meaning of the picture.
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ReplyDelete1. Before that I went to gym and there I tried to hang on a pull-up bar as long as I could.
ReplyDelete2. When we got there we all started to dig the ground
3. We all thought that he find a treasure but it find out that he was just hurt his fingers
4. I told that to everyone else and we found those stairs and went down.
5.When we got there I went to warehouses door and opened it and walked inside.
6.One of my friends decided to be the brave one to press that button and told all of us to step back if something happens.
7. On the way I noticed that I had left that picture at the warehouse and I went back to get it.
8. I reached it from there and ran back to my friends.
9. After that we left to play football and discussed about that we didn't ever get to know what was the meaning of the picture.
There were very minor grammar errors in the text. However, it was well written and easy to read without complicated words.
The ending was a little random for me. The story didn't really tell me anything about the characters, like are they children, teenagers or just really weird adults who believe in hidden treasures.